Score: 10

"The best yet"

submission: Ambient Relations

date: May 19, 2004

Okay lets break it down. Piece by piece. Nice intro...flows well. I like the little crackling lazer sound. The melody on the electric xelephone is good. I like the conversational quality the different parts of the piece have. A good return to the xelephone. And then an exellent transition to strings and guitar plucking.
Crud, I think you've done it. You have created an amazing ambient artwork of a song. Nice originality--havent heard anything along these lines for a while.
You even had some dual melodies--good work!
Deserving of a ten....Sure.

Score: 8

"Nice beat, melody, good overall"

submission: Rave Party #27

date: May 19, 2004

Crud, this is good solid music. No flaws apparent, and the transitions flew nicely. Good build up to the high techno flow. I liked the singing in the background at points.

Score: 8

"Showed some faults, but overall nice work"

submission: I know you're there

date: May 14, 2004

Okay, before I tear into you a bit, let me tell you that you have some of the better music out on NG, and that this is all supposed to be "constructive criticism". You still need to figure out how to transition better. Its too jerky when you go from one part of the song to another. Also, towards the middle and end, this piece wasnt gelling together. The strings and the space-agey melody didnt worked against each other. Finally, in all your songs you always rely on one melody sequence to pull different parts of the song together. You should try incorporating two seperate melodies(preferabbly with different musical qualities) that can weave in and out to tie the song together. Keep at it.